Saturday, October 16, 2021

Senryu ~ Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

mysterious smile
impregnates nature with joy
awakens me now
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M. Asim Nehal
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Matzbur Kubila 19 October 2021

I take it positively. In every smile there is a message to decode.

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Anjandev Roy 17 October 2021

Fantastic indeed.....thank u...

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Michael Jack 17 October 2021

Perfect!

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 17 October 2021

I enjoyed the witty part merged with nature.

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Mamta S 17 October 2021

Yet another wonderful Senryu.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 October 2021

this is a joy to read again

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 October 2021

Wonderful smile awakes you, own bedmate 5 Stars fullest for you both Mr. ASim Sir!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2021

This wonderful poem awakens my soul....beautiful.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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