Wednesday, June 2, 2021

Senryu- Silence ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

your silence, untamed
is like a galloping horse
my silence watchful.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 07 June 2021

Oh, Wow how deeply heart touching! .. Ever such emotion flows through this! .. Powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 June 2021

Beautiful I don't have any more words to describe it

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Kostas Lagos 04 June 2021

Two types of silence, completely different. Remarkable!

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Savita Tyagi 03 June 2021

Such a wonderful Seneryu. The difference between a mind untamed and a mind disciplined could not be expressed any better.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 June 2021

Well done senryu.5 stars.

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Susan Williams 02 June 2021

This senryu works! ! ! The comparison to a horse untamed and running loose and the watchfulness of the human really struck a chord in me! Excellent. Top marks and favorited

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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