Senryu- Silence ~ Comments
your silence, untamed
is like a galloping horse
my silence watchful.
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Such a wonderful Seneryu. The difference between a mind untamed and a mind disciplined could not be expressed any better.
This senryu works! ! ! The comparison to a horse untamed and running loose and the watchfulness of the human really struck a chord in me! Excellent. Top marks and favorited
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7/29/2025 8:36:54 AM # 1.0.0
Oh, Wow how deeply heart touching! .. Ever such emotion flows through this! .. Powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++