Friday, June 18, 2021

Senryu ~ Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

beneath the thick cream
the liquid milk splashes dreams
night submerged silence
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M. Asim Nehal
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 June 2021

the cream of milk splashing the silence of dark night~

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Cream and dream - a comparison so brilliant in silence! lovely Senryu...top marks

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Varsha M 18 June 2021

Liquid milk what sir ji mattha or chhach. Nice dream cream brim. Good one sir ji.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 June 2021

I totally agree with Rose-Marie Bravo! Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2021

Brilliant Senryu. Very thought provoking.

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M. Asim Nehal

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