Tuesday, October 30, 2018

Senryu Series - A Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

moon hides in blue mist
to test our patience in love,
heart illuminates
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mihaela Pirjol 31 October 2018

This Senryu Series proves that you are a master of the art! Bravo!

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Kelly Kurt 30 October 2018

A powerfully written series. Well done!

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Manonton Dalan 30 October 2018

A journey of life nicely described.10

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M Asim Nehal 24 January 2019

Thx Much Mononton D

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Sanjeev Narang 30 October 2018

A wonderful series. hiding in my heart I desire to take your love to eternal place.

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2018

Thx Much Sanjeev

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 October 2018

every senryu is beautifully written on loving life - nice

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thank u so much Mahtab...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2018

A fabulous poem my friend.... loved reading it...10

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thanks much, I am happy that u liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2018

Under blue mist moon hides and shows beautiful face. Heart illuminates and love sparks tenderness. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 30 October 2018

Thanks Much, Sir. So kind of you, Always first to appreciate and give motivating comments.

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