Thursday, September 3, 2015

Senryu Series ~ 9 (Broken Wings) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The broken wings of
an emperor dragonfly.
Surprise feast for ants.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Valsa George 07 September 2015

All three are beautiful, the first being the best! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2015

Thanks much, I appreciate your comments.......

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Sanjukta Nag 04 September 2015

Thoughtful.. the poem is a symbol itself.. thank you..10

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