Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Senryu Series - 77 Empty Nest Comments

Rating: 5.0

container of life
stitched with needle of love
seems abandoned.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2016

The hope for seeing them one day! Nice piece of work.

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Rajnish Manga 12 November 2015

This is like a wholesome feast for the lovers of Haiku. This lovely series is based on promise and optimism starting with the first flight of a young bird. Thanks, Md. Asim ji.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

brds coming back to their abandoned nest what a lovely read tanks Asi-10

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T Rajan Evol 12 November 2015

Crafty haiku series by haiku Master Asim

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Kelly Kurt 11 November 2015

I enjoy reading haiku in series. Thanks, Mohammed

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Valsa George 11 November 2015

Container of life Stitched with needle of love Seems abandoned. Beautiful haiku series strung together with similar beads of thought and turned into a beautiful necklace! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Thank u so much Madam Valsaji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Yes you are very true in drafting. Tree is very hopeful With patience and faith on top....Amazing poem shared definitely. Wise sharing.10

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Thanks much Sir Kumarmaniji

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 November 2015

WONDERFUL CHAIN OF HAIKUS BOUND TOGETHER BY CONTINUITY OF THEME. Nice write. Enjoyed reading, . Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Thank u so much Mr. Ratnakarji.

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