Senryu Series - 71 (To Make You Happy) Comments

Nice poetry beautiful words.

Caregiving! Nice work.

Life is struggling but salty tear fills in emotion in this for happiness one individual promises to turn the world is interesting with imagery. Nice sharing...10

Love is turning the earth and sky upside down to bring happiness to the loved one.A nice drop. Thanks

It's better not to say anything after those sublime lines. just clicking the 10

I like the intensity of your feelings - nice one

there is a mighty lucky gal out there thanks Asim-10+++