Senryu-Rejection Of Proposal Comments

i'm not sure about the punctuation here. i especially think you 'want' a period, not a comma after I. otherwise, i'm not sure who is rejecting whom. well, i still would not be SURE, but i would suspect the one doing the rejecting is NOT I. interesting. bri :)

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