Senryu - Regrets Comments

This is an elegant indirect language for writing poetry, as man and his pronouns are absent within this text, but things express the human world and the feelings and message of the poet, so the darkness and the forest are two symbols in this poem and have been used as a beautiful metaphor, well done with 5 stars

Excellent Senryu....5 stars

Easy M.A.N. It sounds like bush fires ravaging Wisconsin, Australia etc. Am i right?

Darkness is just like thickness of forest. Wonderful expression makes this poem special work! Sun will sprinkle light soon to remove darkness. Thank you for sharing! ..full 5 stars!

loneliness living terrible wood in crowded all water isn't life!

Lonely darkness in thick forest full of regret......what a beautiful plot. Message of loneliness that brought regret. Beautiful haiku.

a thought-provoking senryu very amusing 5 stars

Regrets are a part and parcel of life. Never allow to seep into your life. Nice senryu.10+