Senryu - Puppet Dance Comments

Yes with stolen heart. We remain as puppets.

Really fantastic poem. Short and meaningful.

You always wonder me by your penning. This poem has flown automatically from your tender mind. Heart beats continuously and puppet dances like heart beats. Eyes wonderfully behold the image. You stand and watch but the picture is still reflected in the eyes of the observer. This poem mesmerizes the reader.

Puppet dance is unique.

Superb poem. Very well thought and expressed. Those who r in love will feel the same.

Oh my heart is on your eyes You make it dance to your tune I am silent spectator.10

Brilliantly thought.........nicely written.

A splendid senryu my friend! 5 stars