Senryu Poem Comments

very fine poem...... falling leaves in my imagination and painting of the leaf in my imagination. you have a created a picture in me..... thank you dear poet. tony

With some one's desire and assistance, life continues, despite nature's laws involving senescence, fall, decay, degeneration etc. Nice write. Thanks for writing.

dad paint life for son, good one.

Nicely penned...Falling leaves and painting by father are two different actions merged together.