Senryu- Past Life Comments

That shows wisdom Asimji

Past is always troublesome when you look from future.

we laugh and smile on our fast a very interesting three line poem by you on looking back at memories and trying to figure out what was done in a manner which would be changed now

Past is eventually series of mistakes.

Life's journey! ! Problems to overcome! Memories of the past. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

You are very right. Memories are transferred through life. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.

Past- countless errors seen, Fantastic.

Countless errors seen.....brilliant......thank u, dear friend....anjandev roy.

Wonderful senryu. Looking past will let us know what all we did.

Yes very true words.

THE LEFT PAST FOOTPRINTS CARRY DOCUMENTS OF ERR PRESENT- RECTIFIER!

It is indeed an objective portrayal. If we could become that discerning and honest so as to retract follies while screening our memories. Very thoughtful and closer to life.