Senryu ~ Outcome Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Outcome

Rating: 4.5


flickering candle
amidst, grandeur and sparkle
evoking magic.

teardrops fall-like dew
trickling away- like sorrow
distressing evening.

an eagle hover~
over the shadow valley
wounded bodies lie...

Wednesday, April 5, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: war,sorrow,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 06 April 2023

3 wonderful Senryus.

1 0 Reply
Evelyn Judy Buehler 05 April 2023

Your lovely, impacting images add to this stirring poem's drama.5 stars

3 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success