Senryu ~ On Window Panes. Comments

beautiful I read it again tooo good ur MAN

Very deep and heart moving feel to this! .. Beautifully done! .. And again feelings excellently captured! .. Definitely Wow 5 Stars! ..+++++

Thy finger drawing the worlds on the heart canvas by conscientiousness of thinkinns

All stand naked when we see them through. Great write. MAN

YOU ARE EXCEPTIONAL TRANSLUSCENT I WRITE WITH MY FINGER ON THE SAND ALL WASHE AWAY HAND IN HAND NOT ME NOR MY HAND ONLY REMAINS IS SAND