Senryu -Oceanic Eyes Comments

Awesome senryu.

VERY PHILOSOPHICAL POETRY MINE IS FICKLE MOstly u k noe it ASIM

Ancient skylight is just like oceanic eye. Through this we can see far and this gives us amazing perception. This poem is very brilliantly penned....5 stars.

an ancient skylight in your oceanic eyes boundless horizon.....wow

Yes true depths of eyes finely defined.

Horizon of love and life! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

the skylight unlimited sight thru all sides

The poem with such a lovely theme. 'in your oceanic eyes' rests the history of all mystic thought and infinite human endeavor. A small poem with profound beauty of heart and soul which gives it a timeless sheen. Thank you dear Asim ji.