Sunday, November 1, 2020

Senryu -Oceanic Eyes Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 31 December 2020

Awesome senryu.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 November 2020

VERY PHILOSOPHICAL POETRY MINE IS FICKLE MOstly u k noe it ASIM

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 November 2020

Ancient skylight is just like oceanic eye. Through this we can see far and this gives us amazing perception. This poem is very brilliantly penned....5 stars.

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T Rajan Evol 01 November 2020

an ancient skylight in your oceanic eyes boundless horizon.....wow

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S H 01 November 2020

Yes true depths of eyes finely defined.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2020

Horizon of love and life! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 November 2020

the skylight unlimited sight thru all sides

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Rajnish Manga 01 November 2020

The poem with such a lovely theme. 'in your oceanic eyes' rests the history of all mystic thought and infinite human endeavor. A small poem with profound beauty of heart and soul which gives it a timeless sheen. Thank you dear Asim ji.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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