Senryu- Night And Day Comments

Classic haiku. I liked the message.

Scintillating senryu, Asim Sir. I have enjoyed a very lot.

The poem a wine to my soul

Superb poem. Short and terse.

I am intoxicated by this poem.

Awesome Senryu. Nicely thought.

Very beautiful senryu

Journey of a forelone heart.5***

Contrasting thoughts nicely woven.

Brilliant as ever, you are indeed master of this art.

Excellent senryu Asim