Saturday, January 22, 2022

Senryu ~ Newness Comments

Rating: 4.8

a new joyful song
fresh fragrance of the flowers
an old path obscured
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 24 January 2022

Perfect poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 January 2022

New is ever fresh but old always has its antique beauty......lovely poem Asimji

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2022

Green leaves------------unrest.Absolutely true.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 January 2022

A brilliant and thought provoking senryu adorned with great metaphors and images.

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Suzon Albert 22 January 2022

No worry is no living, to handle it well is what required.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 January 2022

this poem has brilliance

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M. Asim Nehal

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