Senryu- New Life Comments

the professional poet here playing on three different lines, and all of them would lead us to optimistic and positive states of mind, that is why I interest in her deep and poignant works, I would say brilliant oh our dear poet Valsa and have a big 10+ from the honest heart

the conclusion Dreams bud, new life blooms Excellent

The seed - - -> Plant........bloom Cells - - - -> human........birth Dreams - - - - > meta physics world.......utopia

Very nicely done, no one can do it better. Thanks Valsa

Where there is new life, there is hope

To have life.....the dreams, the anticipation, the destiny........very exciting.

Aha! Like a spartan's speech, terse, but then open to interpretations. This is simplicity, of words, meaning and one's standpoint. You're well rooted in this art, dear poetess. Nothing to be added to or removed from the above construction. 10+++

The story how the new life blooms, a thought provoking poem, who is instrumental in it, there must be a divine soul that manages all this.

Every new life has a sad story behind. Nice composition mam.

Birth is a miracle. You capture it so beautifully.

Wow! And Wow! ! ! And additionally, WOW! ! ! !

Steps of creation captured fully in just three lines!

After breaking of pod a seed dreams about bud and bloom in new life. This has been astutely and amusingly you have painted here dear madam. :)