Thursday, September 2, 2021

Senryu - Musical Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

the soothing sunshine
playing softness to my skin
musical morning
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 10 September 2021

wonderful poem for good morning.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 September 2021

A well thought out poem so succinctly expressed

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 September 2021

The Sun always creates wonders in our life. Always a giver.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 September 2021

Musical morning with soothing sunshine - a rare comparison -a feeling of rejuvenation

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Kostas Lagos 03 September 2021

What an image! ! ! Thanks!

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Indira Renganathan 03 September 2021

The morn and the sun shine is always mentioned as morning melody...so it is a musical time only...enjoyed this cute poem...5*****

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 September 2021

Lovely senryu, beautiful musical morning,5 Stars full

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Shreya Hacks 02 September 2021

Skinny morning delightful.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 02 September 2021

Very artful senryu. I liked the idea and the subject.5

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 September 2021

the sweet beautiful words of this has touched my soul Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 02 September 2021

Never thought os the Sn as a musician, But you're right, you're right! There is that tingling musical feeling when the sun first touches our skin. Fantastic write! Enjoyed! !

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M. Asim Nehal

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