Tuesday, October 11, 2016

(senryu) Mountain Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

So remote, quiet…
Like the world is so far off,
And doesn't need us.
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Bill Galvin
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Susan Williams 17 October 2016

I am a fan of brevity when it is vivid and startling and points out a truth. This poem exemplifies all three! Excellent, excellent, excellent. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bill Galvin 17 October 2016

Thank you, Susan; much appreciated.

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