Senryu - Moon Comments

I am amazed at your brilliant concept! ''a pot filled with the water to arrest the moon '' - Wow...such powerful imagery...such juxtaposition...

Hey, I love moon, You have made my day dear...10

You have beautifully noticed the reflection of moon in the pot water. When we balance palm of water also we can see full moon in reflection. An interesting poem is very well penned.10