two hearts are floating
on rapidity of waves
one after other
I love the second verse: rapidity of waves; it resonates with the beating of a heart in love, in a perfect harmony with the last verse. I am in love with your haiku!
Rapid floating of hearts is beautifully and nicely captured and the imagery signifies this truly. This is a nice poem shared here.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Outstanding haiku, 💓 in tenden one after another. Loved it.