Senryu - Love Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Love Love

Rating: 5.0


two hearts are floating
on rapidity of waves
one after other

Senryu - Love Love
Sunday, February 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 25 February 2019

Outstanding haiku, 💓 in tenden one after another. Loved it.

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Mihaela Pirjol 25 February 2019

I love the second verse: rapidity of waves; it resonates with the beating of a heart in love, in a perfect harmony with the last verse. I am in love with your haiku!

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Thanks much MP.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 February 2019

Rapid floating of hearts is beautifully and nicely captured and the imagery signifies this truly. This is a nice poem shared here.10

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