sweet and sour is love
drifting clouds passes mountain
mood swings like seasaw
Quite true! Love gives one a mixed bag of joy and sorrow! How we can tackle it depends on our moods. A beautiful Senryu! A 10
Yes! ! ! Like seasaw! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
How greatly you have described love! The imagery in the second verse, evokes such melancholic feeling...
Love is like seesaw and drifting clouds. It is both sweet and sour. A brilliant poem executed incisively.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sweet and sour is love.....absolutely true my friend! A fabulous Senryu! (10)