Senryu - Love Is Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Love Is

Rating: 5.0


sweet and sour is love
drifting clouds passes mountain
mood swings like seasaw

Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2018

sweet and sour is love.....absolutely true my friend! A fabulous Senryu! (10)

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T Rajan Evol 13 March 2019

Fantastic poem...................................

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Valsa George 28 November 2018

Quite true! Love gives one a mixed bag of joy and sorrow! How we can tackle it depends on our moods. A beautiful Senryu! A 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2018

Yes! ! ! Like seasaw! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 07 November 2018

How greatly you have described love! The imagery in the second verse, evokes such melancholic feeling...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2018

Love is like seesaw and drifting clouds. It is both sweet and sour. A brilliant poem executed incisively.10

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