Friday, December 25, 2020

Senryu: Love For Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

soft silver moonlight
paper boat merrily drifts
and our love blossoms
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2021

DJ admire your work.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 31 December 2020

Superb Senryu. You are great when u write Haiku, senryu

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Zoyza Da Vinka 30 December 2020

Terse haiku. Liked it MAN.

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S H 30 December 2020

Maturity of love nicely put in words.5*

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Varsha M 26 December 2020

Yes sir... moonlight drifting paperboat along with our emotions.

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Kostas Lagos 26 December 2020

This is a perfectly written haiku! Bravo!

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M. Asim Nehal

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