Senryu ~ Love ♡ Comments

A floating heart. Truth of life.

DJ like the terse verse. This one is fabulous.

Five stars are not enough. I need a whole constellation to rate this poem

Delightful and insightful Senryu, love nurture all the world and his waves are so calming to the mind and soul

This is awesome 👌senryu.

A wonderful senryu, evoking the heart's endless capacity for love.

Filled with love. Lovely poem Asim.

Straight to the point of love. On target.

How love nurtures in silent darkness of this earth, when moon shines and the waves touches the shores of heart. Lovely poem, MAN,5 STars

Water, land and Air all gelled together for this wonderful Senryu. Liked it Asim Ji.

Simply superb! ! !

A poem of great depth in just minimal lines that capture the wonders of love.

I am amused by these three lines. To reach the depth of a sea in love is just what we all try to achieve. Seldom we find floating on waves and feeling silent and darkness both.

What a magnificent love story in three lines, deeper and apparent at the same time and floating on life's waves. Full Stars

Nice sirji. So you float in waves seeking rest.