Senryu - Limerick Comments

A well composed piece. Excellently crafted.....10++

Indeed a great trap workout! Lovely Senryu, Asim Sir! A 10++++ full score!

A well written and observed write.....penned well

Nice comparison. Spider's web compared to combining of hairs.

Workout! ! Facing the muse of life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Love itself is a trap for life. A beautiful trap indeed.10++

You have brilliantly noticed the spinning of spider and combing of hair of a girl. This perceptional Limeric Senryu gives unlimited fum and expresses humor. This is a very brilliant poem...10

H ah ah a great trap in making....wonderful thinking.