Tuesday, January 11, 2022

Senryu ~ Life's Blanket Comments

Rating: 5.0

transparent blanket
this life thus fails to cover
our greed and wishes
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
David Wood 14 January 2022

very meaningful Senryu on today's attitudes.

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Sandra Feldman 14 January 2022

Great, as usual, dear Dr.!

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Sandra Feldman 14 January 2022

Yes, our less favorable side we cannot hide! But, does our ever smaller favored side, show too

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Pallab Chaudhury 12 January 2022

Fabulous! Well done....

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Nabakishore Dash 12 January 2022

Truthful write.I enjoyed.

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Indira Renganathan 12 January 2022

Lovely and greatly meaningful....like it

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 January 2022

Your brief poem has spoken volumes. Love it!

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Suzon Albert 11 January 2022

Excellent summary of this life.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 January 2022

Bravo! Doc Just Bravo! I can't think anything else but I love it

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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