Tuesday, February 5, 2019

Senryu - Life Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Gordon Walter 01 January 2021

Very well thought poem.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 31 December 2020

Excellent poem.

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Zuzu Mutairi 31 December 2020

Intelligent writing, nicely done.

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Poetic Sky 30 December 2020

Interesting poem Asimji.

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 30 December 2020

Beautiful poem. Painting alive!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 December 2020

A crow is the most intelligent bird, like person's intelligence! We read here what he is doing. Very intelligent bird, most impressive haiku

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2020

To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2020

Brilliant write! Perseverance, intelligence, resilience and resourcefulness are our great arms toward success in life. A great poem well crafted.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2019

With the romance of nature and the fragrance of life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

Wonderful poem on life! Brief but insightful my friend...............10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 February 2019

When light enters and gives warmness ice melts. This cold weather becomes warm by intelligence of sun. A nice poem is well penned.10

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

A frozen ice melts an intelligent cold crow waiting for the nut..... beautiful imagery

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