Senryu: Life! Comments

We can certainly feel, the sense of defeat. Fantastic, brevity!

Sorry you missed the boat, But your poetry certainly strikes, The right, Notes.

While it sounds a bit sad to be on the pier, it may be the best thing that can happen sometimes

Dear David, this is a great and powerful poem.

What a great and powerful poem. While standing on the pier whiler the liner sails away, sounds a bit sad, it is not rarely the best thing that can happen to us.

Few words speaks volumes. I can relate to this Senryu.

A brilliant depiction of life in just minimal lines. A great Senryu. Top Marks! ! !

Wow! Wonderful three-liner. Yes! It is very true about my life too. The intrigues of life can not be expressed more vividly and more searingly. Full score.

mine too