Senryu -In Your Absence ♥ Comments

Superb poem. Short but very very nice.

Brief but beautiful and meaningful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

Candles are symbol of self destruction.

Candle created imagery. Silent night created another imagery and the parting time created magical effect.

Blooming candle light Rosy night the whole palace None was; but we were

Beautiful words Sir. Short and to the point.