Senryu - In Competition Comments

Brilliant senryu. Thought provoking. There might be separation in their bodies and in life but love will bind them to eternity. Beautifully crafted.

two body, one soul life on earth and life on sky in competition

They remain together and compete as well.

There is amazing competition in life in both sky and Earth. You have brilliantly penned this poem.

Interesting poem. I liked the subject of the poem.

Earth and sky two body and one soul, I guess or sun and moon? In competition 5*