I swam in the sea
But not when it was raining
Because I'd get wet!
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I fail to get at the irony. I find pleasure to look at the humour
Getting wet in the rain, may have more detrimental effect than that in the sea! Well done.
This poem can have various interpretations. Some will take it as funny, some as serious. This one will keep the reader thinking. As for me, I see irony here. Kudos!
Love it! Well done David. And thanks for the advice! x
Sometimes our thinking is very silly!