Friday, November 11, 2022

Senryu: Getting Wet Comments

Rating: 5.0

I swam in the sea
But not when it was raining
Because I'd get wet!
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David Wood
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COMMENTS
Rob Lamberton 17 March 2024

Sometimes our thinking is very silly!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

swimming in the sea but without wetting!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2022

I fail to get at the irony. I find pleasure to look at the humour

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2022

Excellent and impeccable.....thank u....

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Pallab Chaudhury 12 November 2022

Getting wet in the rain, may have more detrimental effect than that in the sea! Well done.

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Nosheen Irfan 12 November 2022

This poem can have various interpretations. Some will take it as funny, some as serious. This one will keep the reader thinking. As for me, I see irony here. Kudos!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 November 2022

lol This imade my day Bravo!

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 November 2022

Love it! Well done David. And thanks for the advice! x

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