Thursday, October 14, 2021

Senryu ~ Fortune Comments

Rating: ★5.0

fortune ~ a lamp-flame
flickering against strong wind
at the edge of hope
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M. Asim Nehal
hope wind
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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

Fascinating words keep dancing, finally to meet at the gate of Fortune, it surely brings Hope. True mesmerizing poem 5 Stars fullest

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 14 October 2021

My fav poem now.

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Shreya Hacks 14 October 2021

Wonderful, fabulous....

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S H 14 October 2021

Hope carries everything. Fantastic one MAN

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Zumas Millamo 14 October 2021

Wonderful Senryu.

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Juhaina Tumlu 14 October 2021

Wisely written Senryu. I appreciate.

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 October 2021

A positive poetry.

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Deepak S S 14 October 2021

Brilliant! ! ! !

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Martinez Salotori 14 October 2021

Fortune favors brave. I liked your version as well.

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Mamta S 14 October 2021

Hope carries the fortune, fantastic one Mr. Asim

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 October 2021

Beautifully expressed! A motivational piece of work.....appreciated.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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Nagpur
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