Saturday, October 31, 2020

Senryu - Fortunate Lovers Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Rajnish Manga 01 November 2020

The poem puts life of the lovers in a proper perspective. Those who are blessed with love are fortunate which is true vice versa. But the last line of the poem makes us think for those who are deprived or less privileged. Thanks, Asim ji, for such a meaningful poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 November 2020

A well composed poem. Truly fabulous and superb...5 stars*****

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 October 2020

Love comes but not for all Blind love seeks one goal where as liberal love enjoys widely!

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Pallab Chaudhury 31 October 2020

Wow! A nicely crafted senryu.... Thank you for sharing with us. 5*,

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M. Asim Nehal

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