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A well composed poem. Truly fabulous and superb...5 stars*****
Love comes but not for all Blind love seeks one goal where as liberal love enjoys widely!
Wow! A nicely crafted senryu.... Thank you for sharing with us. 5*,
The poem puts life of the lovers in a proper perspective. Those who are blessed with love are fortunate which is true vice versa. But the last line of the poem makes us think for those who are deprived or less privileged. Thanks, Asim ji, for such a meaningful poem.