Senryu For A Rambling Man Comments

(CONT.) 2 - i laughed after reading it, BUT i would not call it a Senryu from what i've read of senryus! (see above) to MyPoemList nonetheless. bri (:

1 - Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5,7,5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. i count 4+5+4= 13. (CONT.)

Enjoyed the fun hidden in this thoughtful poem