dewdrops of desires
made an icicle around
trapped inside a life
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dewdrops of desires---gorgeous wording..... it begs to be reread again and again--that is the power of a poetic pen! ! ! 5 stars but it deserves a skyfull of stars
Nicely crafted one and with deep philosophical essence... Congrats! Stay safe /PC
A wonderful Senryu that captures the very essence of family. Brilliantly crafted. Liked the ultimate stanza. To my Poem List.
netted relations together, a family a bunch to enjoy we stay together In sorrow and happiness like a tree on ground----A wonderful poem about family, that is bonded through joy and sorrow.
Enjoyed this poem with its lovely images... well done...