Sunday, October 31, 2021

Senryu- Family Chain Comments

Rating: 5.0

dewdrops of desires
made an icicle around
trapped inside a life
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M. Asim Nehal
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Harley White 01 November 2021

Enjoyed this poem with its lovely images... well done...

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Susan Williams 01 November 2021

dewdrops of desires---gorgeous wording..... it begs to be reread again and again--that is the power of a poetic pen! ! ! 5 stars but it deserves a skyfull of stars

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Tihama Hykam 31 October 2021

Nicely thought poem, Family keeps together.

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Pallab Chaudhury 31 October 2021

Nicely crafted one and with deep philosophical essence... Congrats! Stay safe /PC

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 October 2021

A wonderful Senryu that captures the very essence of family. Brilliantly crafted. Liked the ultimate stanza. To my Poem List.

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Bharati Nayak 31 October 2021

netted relations together, a family a bunch to enjoy we stay together In sorrow and happiness like a tree on ground----A wonderful poem about family, that is bonded through joy and sorrow.

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M. Asim Nehal

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