Saturday, April 15, 2023

Senryu ~ Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see in those eyes
the vastness of firmament
and waves on the sea
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M. Asim Nehal
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Richard Wlodarski 23 April 2023

Incredibly beautiful vivid imagery. A joy to behold, my friend.

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David Wood 23 April 2023

They eyes say it all. Great Senru.

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Sandra Feldman 23 April 2023

A dreamlike poem, Eyes relecting love and beauty that mesmerize. Excellent and unforgettable!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 April 2023

Bravo my friend, Asim I enjoyed it very much

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Anjandev Roy 23 April 2023

Fantastic write.....my friend........

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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