Friday, March 25, 2022

Senryu ~ Emptiness. Comments

Rating: ★4.5

no soldiers on gate
dilapidated castle
empty honeycomb
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M. Asim Nehal
empty
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Richard Wlodarski 28 March 2022

You have so brilliantly exemplified emptiness in this exquisite poem. Love the imagery!

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Indira Renganathan 28 March 2022

All the three are lovely....I like the third one the most....5*****

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Poetic Sky 27 March 2022

Raining eyes....symbol of tears.

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Mamta S 27 March 2022

Crafty chain, all in full emptiness.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
M. Asim Nehal
M. Asim Nehal
Nagpur
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