Senryu- Ego Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- Ego

Rating: 5.0


a pampered ego
like a ferocious lion
ready to have meals

Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: ego
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Mostazir 12 March 2019

Yes ready to have everything....nice thought

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 March 2019

very fine and original about 'Ego dear Asim. thank u. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 March 2019

what a coincident since morning I too have been thinking who has a greater bloated EGO MAN WOMAN OR POET DO tell me MAN

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 March 2019

Wow! Asim ji this is fantastic expression. I always viewed Ego like a mountain. But now, i can view Ego like a ferocious lion too. Brilliant.....10

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T Rajan Evol 22 July 2020

Wow so well written. Enjoyed reading it.

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Indira Renganathan 16 March 2019

The best comparison I have ever read..pampered ego is truly a ferocious lion....which is ready to have meals...congratulations Asim..10++++....thanks a lot for all your comments on my poem...God bless you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

Ego is fiery in expression this captures self and burns others. This is very dangerous and thought provoking. We should be careful to check ego. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Konab Ghumman 13 March 2019

amazing original thoughts,

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Valsa George 13 March 2019

False ego or bloated up ego is very dangerous! This can be sometimes more ferocious than a lion ready to tear down! So meaningfully put, Asim!

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