Senryu -Dreams Comments

DJ admire your skills. Short yet meaningful.5*

DJ admire your skills. Short yet meaningful.

Lovely imagination, 'on the edge of time I see my dreams, when watching clouds.... beautiful

on the edge of time........we all are living i see my dreams hanging......hope I am watching clouds...........desires floating.

Dreams hanging on the edge of the time and we are watching it like passing clouds Brilliant.5***

Timeless journey in style.5*

A thoughtful three-liner! You are a very talented poet....I see a great future in you. Carry the good work on.

Hanging dreams says many tales.

Hold tight to your dreams cause they are yours to be cherished.

Asim, your three lines are so revelatory. You make this event so sigificant. You have only a few moments (" on the edge of time" ;) to capture this fleeting moment of the reality of dreams. " I am watching clouds" - like time itself, the cloud formations must be apprehended quickly or they change past recognition. But in the suspended moment of the poem, I'm at your side, marveling at this transient beauty.