Senryu - Drawing Room Comments

You have brilliantly painted a motionless river on canvas through your valuable perception. An interesting poem is excellently penned...10

A wonderful piece. Well composed....10+++

Symbolic river / painting an artistic work which is of no use to the fishes swimming in the water tank. So close to live aren't we living fake life when truth is hanging in front of us? Thoughtful poem.10

Artificial river on the wall and fish swims in tank speaks volumes. Nice shot poem.

Beautifully described on the drawing room. A sofa, . Laughable humor And cup of tea. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful senryu.

Illusions are the greatest source to keep one alive. Lovely thought.10++ for this Senryu.