No other better way than yours to express the emotion here depicted is there ...kudos Valsa
fires of discontent// awesome phrase, it expresses many things
hot fires of discontent....... naturally it burns., ., ., very fine and you express it so well and the meaning is deep. thank u dear professor.
Fabulous use of metaphor! The brevity of expression articulated through this beautiful Senryu provides a reader rooms for keen contemplation! Loved reading it! ...................................Dillip
A beautiful metaphorical senryu on discontent has been presented by you nicely in brief dear madam, I appreciate this poem.10
A nice metaphoric Senryu..............................................
disaconent......... badly burnt......... life experiences... is there any one who is not burnt.....? ? love this poem dear Valsa...... you are one of the best poets here in poemhunter. thnk you dev.
discontent causes much duress just be happy with what we're blessed thanks Valsa
Do not ever raise the hot fire of discontent, consequences are undesirable. Beautifully described with economy of words.
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Brilliant one... just wonderful