Senryu- Coronavirus Comments

............. Spitting fire and fume................

this masterpiece is contain very imaginative poetic metaphor, short and alive...excellent 10++

Yes the demon took form of Corona with a motive to kill humans with its fume and fire. It's on fire and going on hammer and tongs gifting death.👌👌👌👌 well written verse.10++ rated verse!

Well written senryu........thank u. anjandev roy.

Danger of demonic Corona virus is wonderfully expressed in few lines. We should pray to God. He can only save us...10+

Loved the comment of poetess @Indira Renganathan, so simply stated.

The poem aptly describes the prevailing pandemic as a Demon. It depicts the crisis of the time, that is likely to go down in the human history as an epic of destruction. An excellent senryu, Valsa! 10/10

The demon with a crown is out threatening to swallo humanity as a whole....10

The demon with a crown is out threatening to swallo humanity as a whole

A true picture of prevailing crisis in your wonderful poem 10

A beautiful syneru with 5-7-5 syllabic lines which I lack in many three liner! Coronavirus is really spitting fire and fire...liked the conceptualisation dear madam...10/10

Corona virus is in hot discussion a sit has frightened the world. But we should not be worried at all. We should fight against Corona Virus. Finally we will be victorious. Corona will be defeated soon as we hope. This poem is meant for social awareness is amazing.10

Very nice senryu, Valsa. My latest poem is also about the Corona virus. It's called " Avoiding the Crown" . I think you might like it.

A very timely reminder of evil, and the forms it can take. How can something so small wield so much power? I am reminded of the saying, " the devil is in the details." Superbly written, Valsa.

Three brilliant lines that depict the evilness of Corona virus. Superb imagery as always. Excellent Senryu.

Wonderful expression about Coronavirus// Make home quarantine Be Isolated with the poetic power Lit up the light of healthy on universal winds Let the covid-19 run on empty field Let the covid-19 be tired lonely Let the covid-19 die hard without rebirth...........

A timely contribution. Reminds me YATA YATA HI DHARMASYA..... verses of Bhagavat Geeta. God has His purpose behinf every flash. Let us hope for the best.....10 Shiva's Tandav dance of death and destruction aims for new creation, this one? Demonic is an apt description for a novel corona virus causing pandemonium. THANKS TO ALL THESE GREAT POETS KEEP FAITH ALIVE

The demon is out Dances with a crown on head Spitting fire and fume EXCELLENT DESCRIPTION DO READ MY TWO CORONA POEMS JUST POST VG

Coronavirus is more dangerous than a demon. Astutely delineated. Brief but beautiful. Thanks for bringing awareness.

the demon is out! ! ! ! and the demon is everyone! ! ! excellent write, Valsa