Senryu- Concert Comments

War's thundering symphony creates fear. We do not like war, we need peace. A beautiful poem in concise is shared amazingly. TFS,

God save the people from the destruction of a war, give us guidance to live in peace. Amen!

The the muse of dead bodies around. Thanks for sharing.

A synchronised concert............10+++

Violence of the vibrating chords represents the war. Striking presentation of the war.

'But at our backs we always hear/ War's wingèd chariot hurrying near! ' Unfortunately, that is how the world has turned into.. And it is not only the typical war with bombs and tanks.. Humanity, as it appears, is at war with itself.. And that is very sad... With only three lines, you captured the apprehension that now dominates our world ever so badly.. It is pathetic that our lives are lived in this constant state of fear.. Fear, hatred, jealousy, envy, and worst of all apathy have replaced the more human values.. Here we have failed as a civilisation... Thanks for sharing Valsa ma'm.. A significant senryu under these circumstances...

Awesome. Fully conveys the horror of war with an economy of words.10

War...a 3 letter word which is the synonym of destruction...nice sharing...thank you :)

The tell tale heart. Poignant Senryu

The moment of fear... nicely captured.

Can hear the fear in your senryu Valsa. Well penned...10