Senryu Cherry Blossoms Comments

There is something gorgeous about blossom petals floating away - their moment of liberation! Enjoyed this swirling petal-like poem.

condensed and compressed...you have a neat hand in the economy of expression esp. in the encoded ideas...

This little senryu speaks volume.

Cherry blossoms serve their life's purpose and fall to the ground. Beautiful senryu. Thank you.

this is a natural process and this happens in human life too, excellent write, thanks for sharing... i love it

Wow! So profound thought written with a few words!

no more attachments, I like it, thanks.

Sometimes the attached has to fall to be free, a great poem.

Lovely! I'm not brave enough to try this type of poetry, but this is so beautiful! Dawn xxxxx