Senryu ~ Change. Comments

An amazing Spring Senryu 5 Stars full score. A oprecious theme: Change.

Amazing imagery and feeling in this! .. Filled with such breathtaking beauty! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...++++++

SO BEAUTIFUL SENYRU DR M A N YEAH UR FAN PPME OUT OF PH SCENE

Wow Asim ji! Fascinating Senryu! When time turns its wheels. pink petals cascade down......10

ah the changes of seasons Bravo!

Beautifully done! Writing a senryu is not just putting 5-7-5 in three lines but the beauty and power lies at its core. I look at the essence of this value laden composition and appreciate it.

In this tiny capsule, you have captured the essence of changes that occur in passage of time. How the green leaves could turn pink and be shed by the tree, is also indicated, apart from how the flowers wither..Nice poem.5 *s

And thus life moves on, people come and go, trees grow and fall, water evaporate and fall again...

Punch line is 'when time turns its wheels.' Very well written.

Inevitable change, Petals falling- Great Imagery, Leafy tree - Perfect for season and Time wheel - Fabulous.

This senryu is filled with images.