Senryu -Change Of Season Comments

sun goes, moon comes summer, monsoon goes autumn come- by this way life goes, death comes to invite another life!

Brilliantly done. Using gender is awesome

Yet another fantastic poem. You sre the best when it comes to Haiku and Senryu.

Congratulations sir for being popular poet. Good to see your name.

A look at the most exciting relationships among all human beings on earth transforming itself in the wake of seasonal change- autumn can be the turning point. Thanks, Asim ji. This is awesomely articulated.