Senryu Chain: Life Cycle Comments

All three are in sync and wonderfully written.

Excellent Senryu. Great write.

Very beautiful and heart touching senryu. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful senryu

Goodbye and welcome note

Full of exuberance. I enjoyed Sir

All three nicely woven.

A chain of pearl nicely put around the neck of this life.

This chain has wrapped us for good! Excellent

Awesome imagery captures the feel of evening exquisitely. How beautiful! ! ! !

Brilliant, indeed life passing away between realism and dreams like the shifting scenes.

DJ liked it. When darkness appears people tend to fear but life is not so bad. It goes on with positive and negative feelings.

A day frim life nicely chained in Senryu. Class poem.