Senryu Chain - Analysis Of Lost Glory Comments

fragrance of flowers diminishes with the time only thorns survive

A lovely realistic poem....well written...10 ++++++....thanks for your comment on me as a poetess rated to 423 out of 500 Asim

Nice chain with selected theme wisely.

All three power packed and meaningful.

5 Star poem. New rating with new poem and new format.

Very true words. Good metaphorical imagination. Mementos of past glory Ashes of burial All call to build castle On the plinth of lessons Sowed under circumstances To mature me little more As I grow up.