at the setting sun
ships return to the harbor
she searches blue flag.
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A worth waiting fills life with hopes and delicate feelings. The senryo is amazingly composed.5 Stars.
Brilliant senryu as always. Very thought provoking.
There is always elegance in your poems. Those words are meant to have each other
Waiting time is always long and it crawls, how beautifully you have described three situations.. A wife waiting for her hubby and a child waiting for his parents and the life waiting to fly...to live, for food and what not.5**
A wait is prescious but executing it is tiresome...if we manage we succeed else we perish missing the best. Good words.
A brilliant 👏 chain of senryu