Monday, January 18, 2021

Senryu Chain - A Wait Comments

Rating: 4.9

at the setting sun
ships return to the harbor
she searches blue flag.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Clara Clark 20 January 2021

A brilliant 👏 chain of senryu

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 January 2021

A worth waiting fills life with hopes and delicate feelings. The senryo is amazingly composed.5 Stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2021

Brilliant senryu as always. Very thought provoking.

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Unwritten Soul 19 January 2021

There is always elegance in your poems. Those words are meant to have each other

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Deepak S S 18 January 2021

Time stays till we meet someone whom we care and love.

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Shreya Hacks 18 January 2021

Waiting time is always long and it crawls, how beautifully you have described three situations.. A wife waiting for her hubby and a child waiting for his parents and the life waiting to fly...to live, for food and what not.5**

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S H 18 January 2021

Excellent chain of thoughts on wait.5*

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Kostas Lagos 18 January 2021

Well written chain of senryu

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Rini Shibu 18 January 2021

search and wait is well expressed

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Varsha M 18 January 2021

A wait is prescious but executing it is tiresome...if we manage we succeed else we perish missing the best. Good words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 January 2021

Wow! A fabulous senryu! Appreciated.5 stars

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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